NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 8 – The Eclipse

Got together with Mom, some of Mom’s neighbors and some of my cousins today in Rensselaer to watch the eclipse. We had eclipse glasses but we also had a great few hours and for most of it had a great view of a 97% eclipse despite the passing clouds.

Trying not to stare
we raised our eclipse glasses
again and again.

fleeting minutes
wondering where the sun went
nibbled by the moon

Opted to stay home
missed totality but
enjoyed the eclipse

eclipse, we reckoned
all heads tilting at the same
angle, lips ajar

the moon’s shadow
in a brief starring role
stole the spotlight

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NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 7

Woke today to weather maps that promised: “incomplete obscuration of the sun during totality” which of course is the moon’s job. Half of the weather service seems focused on how to describe statistics so you spend enough time trying to figure out what the percentages are describing and what it means to you, perhaps until you lose interest. The other half are apparently celebrating poetry month with seven syllable phrases like “incomplete obscuration”. Here, it’s going to be too cloudy but have a free haiku line.

On the other side
of these clouds
Where we imagine
Our long gone family,
Our cats and dogs, our beliefs,
Some off-screen
Coincidence of sun and moon
And us plays out unseen
These things, like so much
Of each long life that
nightly fills the darkness
With if onlys

After weeks of watching
The hopeful weather reports
Of course it’s cloudy

This time, memory
Of the last eclipse we saw
Will have to suffice

weathermen forecast
incomplete obscuration
clouding the future

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NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 6

Spotty sun on and off. Cats are sleeping. I’m trying to think what has to be done in case we travel to see the eclipse! Have a tanka while waiting.

The sun falls gently
on the garden’s daffodils
i can only watch

while waiting for the eclipse
the flowers turn toward the light

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Things found on the way to something else.

During the pandemic, I began watching Chinese and Korean historical/magical mostly costume dramas which of course I didn’t really understand at all at first, even with subtitles. Eventually, when I could pull my eyes off the beautiful costumes I found that there were tropes in these that I’d not encountered before. And unlike the familiar “the beautiful young lovers lived happily ever after” in more familiar movies and shows, here it was possible that one or both would die.

Some of these shows involve magic but there is often a good dose of martial arts involved too (and lots of food! Not a lot of sex. Very little or no sex actually – often just a small, meaningful kiss…).

Anyway, I am rewatching one of the better dramas which I had watched quite awhile ago. I think it’s one of the best of those I’ve seen in terms of plot lines and all so I’m glad to discover a few things I’d missed first time through. Today I see one of the characters masquerading as a Taoist priest and carrying this thing – a rod with a horsetail like thing on the end. In some shows, it appears to be an emblem of rank, say for a chief eunuch but here… anyway made me wonder.

Googled it up and BAM. Found this lovely bit of description at the Daoist Gate website which stuck me as rather poetic so here you go.

Here is the Wudang horsetail whisk form:

Turn around the body
Yellow dragon covers its head
Old tortoise tries the way
Step in the position of the five elements
Black tiger beats a way
Sweep thousands of soldiers
Turn over rivers and seas
Put up the whip behind the horse
Monkey shrinks its body
Twist the bamboo
Break Wu Mountain at the waist
Poke away the clouds to see the sun
Look around on both sides
Monkey offers fruit
Touch the sea
Dragon waves its tail
Horse kicks the leg
Falling star chases the moon
Subdue the dragon and the tiger
Turn back to see the moon
Attack the yellow dragon
Whip the horse to run faster
Balance Yin and Yang

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NaPoWriMo 2024 Day 5

Today NaPoWriMo.net offered a lovely poem and idea as a prompt. Isn’t it better to see the tiny good things than to not see them or worse to never see them?

How lucky I am to be able
to fill the bird feeders
while the chickadees and cardinals
whistle waiting in the shrubs.
Today I thought – how lucky
despite doing pretty menial work
I am able to stay home now
“retired” so I can paint
and spend time with my mother
I can fill the pantry and
enjoy some snacks and go out
to enjoy the clouds.
Maybe each day, I’ll
catch some words
lured by hot coffee or wine.
To every life may come some joy
small moments not always shiny
and if I’m lucky enough
I’ll get another chance
to know how each day
can be a blessing.

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